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Spring break was slowly coming I counted down the days everyday. Monday went by, the Tuesday, and so on . then finally it was Friday and it was that much closer to spring break. I was ready to get out of school. then it was like my mom read my mom and the called on the announcements “Tae’lor Williams for early dismissal” as soon as my foot stepped out that door..my spring break had begun..
On Saturday morning at 7:00 am , my mother and my sister and I drove to Washington Dc, my mothers hometown. It took us about eight hours for us to get their. When we got their my grandparents were so excited to see us. That night my we all went out to this new restaurant. It was like nothing I had ever seen before. It was a restaurant that had Chinese food, soul food, and Mexican food and, sea food. They had shrimp fried rice, fried chicken, tacos, collard greens, egg rolls, Macaroni and cheese and so much more. I had never seen anything like it before. I ordered the jumbo shrimp and fries and I had red velvet cake for desert. A weird combo but it was really good. After that we went back home. The next day my mom’s cousin Jabar, had a cookout. All my mom’s cousin’s and their kids were their. We had a blast!. The food was great and it was fun to see everyone. After that we had to go back to my grandparents to say bye to my cousin Jaela and Breelyn because they were going to Puerto Rico the next day.
On Monday my mom took my sister Sydney and I on the metro to the Zoo downtown. It was really fun to go with my sister, especially because it was her first time going. We saw pandas ,gorilla’s , cheetah’s etc. It was really hot but we still had a good time. We were their for about three hours. While we were their my mom got us dippin dots ice cream. I had cookies and cream and my sister had cotton candy. After we left the Zoo, we stopped at a pizza parlor downtown for some lunch. The pizza was so good and it really hit the spot. When we left we took the metro back home. We were worn out by the time we got home. By that time my grandma had cooked spicy chicken sandwiches and sweet potato french fries. It was good as always.
On Tuesday it was rainy and our plans to go see the White House were canceled. So instead we watched movies all day and stayed in bed eating snacks the whole day. Sense it was raining i got the best sleep ever that night, But luckily the sun was out the next day. I was glad the sun was out because today was our shopping day, which was my favorite day. It was my mom, my grandma and her mom, my sister and I. We went to a bunch of stores and i got a lot of stuff. While we were at the mall we got some cinnamon pretzels from auntie ann’s. After we left the mall we went back home. When we got home it was only 2:00, and my mom and I still wanted to go out. So, we snuck out and went to target and Ross , but while we were in Ross we started getting tired ourselves so we wnt home again. That night my mom cooked juicy turkey burgers, with all the fix’ns . It was so good and for desert Sydnye and I had vanilla ice cream with Oreo’s om top. On Wednesday night i stayed up late with my sister watching Tv. I eventually went to sleep around 4am. On Thursday, my mom took y sister and me to the Monastery. It was a old church up the street from my grandmother’s house, so we walked. It was absolutly BEAUTIFUL !. We took some amazing pictures and we had a good time. When i was about two years old i went before, but of course I didn’t remember it, but now i was older and I will always remember this day. That night we had to pack because we were leaving in the morning. I wasn’t ready to go, but i was ready to see my friends. At 5:00 my alarm on my phone rang. It was time to go. We didn’t even worry about getting dressed, we went in our pj’s. My grandfather helped us with the bags to the car and by 5:27 we on our way back to Charlotte. My sister and i slept the whole way and our ride didn’t take as long. We hit our driveway at about 1 pm. It felt so good to be back home. My dad didn’t get off work until 3, so we had to wait for him to get home. He was so happy to see us, it had been way too quiet in the house. That day we just relaxed and ordered pizza from papa john’s. We were all tired and we just wanted to enjoy being home. Sunday came and that meant school was starting back. I was so not ready to go back but i had to. I wanted to enjoy the last day of spring break, so we wanted to hang out with my dad. We went to Rivergate shopping center down the street from my house. We wet inside of Target and then we went to Cold stone creamery. We sat outside by the fountain and ate our ice cream sense it felt so good outside. After we finished our ice cream, we went back home to get ready for school tomorrow. We ate dinner around 7, and we got our clothes out and took our showers and got ready to go to bed. Sense I was so used to staying up late over break, I couldn’t sleep. I didn’t go to bed until about 12 something. When i woke up it was Monday. Time to get back to work.